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    dots Submission Name: Thank You Dannydots
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    Author: YvonneJoyce
    ASL Info:    16, f, wa
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 11/13/24
    Words: 296
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 115
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    dotsThank You Dannydots
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    I needed to write this poem,
    So I can tell you how I feel.
    It’s not just a little thing up high,
    It’s something deep, down and real.

    I’m scared just as much as you,
    But you can’t live with this regret.
    I don’t wanna be “that girl”
    That girl you can just forget.

    It’s not at all easy to give away,
    Something you cherish deep inside.
    Something you hold tight onto,
    That can run away and hide.

    But baby you don’t understand,
    The strong passion I have for you.
    There’s something about the way you are,
    I hope you feel this way too.

    It was so hard to give it up,
    But you made me forget my past.
    I just wanna say thank you,
    For not letting it last.

    I am so young, and deathly afraid,
    That this will all end the wrong way.
    I cant explain in pictures of words,
    Of what I truly want to say.

    I wanted to many times,
    To leave this horrid place.
    Yet when I’m with you,
    The bad seems to erase.

    There’s something about your smile,
    Your laughter and your touch.
    That makes me want to live here,
    And achieve with so much.

    There’s something in your eyes,
    But I don’t really know.
    If I can truly be okay,
    Without letting it show.

    So I pray god will hear my prayer,
    And bless me for what I need.
    And all the while let me get a new life,
    But I need you, to be my seed.

    I know you’ll always be here,
    With each small step I take.
    Baby, my love for you is not a play thing,
    It comes as easily as it can break.




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