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    dots Submission Name: Hot Air Balloondots
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    Author: YvonneJoyce
    ASL Info:    16, f, wa
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 11/13/24
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsHot Air Balloondots
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    I think that I might fly away,
    In my hot air balloon.
    And hide away from worldly worries,
    On the dark side of the moon.

    There’s one thing I need before,
    I float into the blue.
    I need a sky partner,
    And I want him to be you.

    We’ll fly beyond the storm clouds,
    And we’ll watch from above.
    I’ll cover you in a rainbow,
    As we feel each other love.

    Dreamy, drifting, laughs,
    Changing every day.
    Every night your loving smile,
    Will be my milky way.

    The moon will stand before us,
    Sailing there in heavens height.
    For nothing else can challenge,
    Our everlasting light.

    Venus shining on us,
    Glowing soft at our devotion.
    Our daily drifting dalliance,
    In loves beautiful ocean.

    And should we tire of drifting,
    And the stars are floating by.
    We’ll hook onto a meteor,
    And soar across the night sky.

    Will you be,
    The man on our ship?
    Im ready, heart all packed with love,
    To last us for our trip.

    Take my hand and step aboard,
    Were heading for the sun.
    We’re flying till we find a place,
    Where two hearts are one.


    Yvonne Sanders
    11/16/06




    Submitted on 2007-11-18 22:37:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have a way with words... this poem was very well put together.
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]



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