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    dots Submission Name: Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Sir Fusting
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 5/24/19
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThoughtsdots
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    She wastes away in her shelter, her eyes glazed,
    Oh broken soulless girl, what drives you? Hope?
    None waits for the foolish,
    Drink your heart away, let the hands take their pick.
    Why do I still mine? Love, you sad soul.
    Don't mind me, I'll forget once the drugs kick in.




    Submitted on 2007-11-19 10:31:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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