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    dots Submission Name: Never Said It Back dots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 327
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 1052
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1876



    Description:
       The other night I met up with my ex boyfriend of 1 and a half years and he gave me all the stuff i ever got him back... it really hurt so I wrote this and sent it too him throght e-mail.


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    You just walked out the door,
    and I can hardly see the screen through the shroud of tears,

    I dedicate this one last poem to you and all that was,
    Though the animosity has grown and our world grown stretched,
    I'll always remember the good times that were.
    I wish the same could be said for you,
    but looking at this sack of memories on the floor,
    I see you wish to feel them no more.

    Regardless of the coldness in your stare,
    I still saw the excited look of the boy on that fateful day.
    The sun beaming on his face,
    The smile unaltered by feelings amiss.
    I saw the eyes of the boy I loved and still do today,
    and wish this end was not complete.

    Our story may be ending in tragedy,
    Once what was, ripped from the inside out,
    but as I sit here pouring all of it out,
    I don't regret a moments kiss,
    a day well spent, and the night's conversing till we couldn't speak.

    I'll remember this for the rest of my life,
    and hope you will do the same,
    Regardless of the words that were said,
    our hearts had no ears, just our love for one another.

    To look into those memories would be the worst I could do,
    I only wish to see them again with you.
    Maybe one day we can sit and reflect on these times passed.

    But now it seems no matter how I say it,
    or how I try to make you believe,
    or even how i look in your eyes,
    I know by saying those three words....
    The ones first uttered by asking me how I felt,
    I know......you,
    Will Never Say It Back

    And I know as long as I know my words to be true,
    and the way I feel unwavering by this choice,
    I will ALWAYS Love You




    Submitted on 2007-11-19 11:13:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      GREAT! I loved this one,you really hit the nail on the head. Thank you really enjoyed.
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]
      Awe. i have been here before. i loved this poem it had great emotion. thanks for saying whats in everyones head. well put!
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel this way about a ex girlfriend of mine. I know it can never be, but from time to time we both smile at each other and wonder how it might of turned out, anyway great write! You made your point and thats all we ever want right?
    Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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