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    dots Submission Name: Poetic Pridedots
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    Author: never_far_away
    ASL Info:    20-female-TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 105/92/53
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 449
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    dotsPoetic Pridedots
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    There are no bad poets
    Because poetry comes from the heart
    Some may be more articulate than others
    In this so wordy of an art

    We express the feelings
    That we carried on our sleeve
    We twist and mingle them
    Into an intricate weave

    The words flow from our soul
    Of the secrets we hide
    To show you the true meaning
    Of our poetic pride





    Submitted on 2007-11-19 14:28:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you code breaker you. lol. poe
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem was great it's a very out of the norm poem...

    You can really understand what you're trying to say loud and clear and I like that.

    Very original... and thats ALWAYS good!

    Way to go!
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


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