Description: i dont have half and idea what i was thinking when i wrote this. however, it is quite possible i wrote this during a lector in class. i was mostly asleep.
The jester and the king -------------------------------------------
Alles life a game
Simply not left from fame
The mothers poor soul
Indeed does weep
For the jest shall be feed
on the kings sheep
the king shall strike
on the long lost sun
time played afon
the jest no longer sings
his merry long songs
oo!
very well done.
so much sialies and metaphores! i love it.
it is very well written and yay!
the only thing i have to say is to maybe make it a little bit longer or make another poem with the same basic structure that is a little bit longer. but other than that WONDERFUL!.
Submission Name: The jester and the king
