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    Author: pasardspandora
    ASL Info:    17/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 24/21/8
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
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    im so blind i cant even see that this whole time u were fakeing that u never really cared about me hating my self for letting u win i put myself through this over an over agian i cry late at night asking god to take not mine but ur life if i cant have u no one else will dying insde ill no longer conceal or hide the way i feel ill move on once agian but part of u is in me the one part of u u will never see




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