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    dots Submission Name: Pull Yourself Togetherdots
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    Author: enigmaticone
    ASL Info:    22/m/nh
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 16/36/23
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 127
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    Bytes: 464



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    dotsPull Yourself Togetherdots
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    A feeble mind
    Full of misery
    Puts you far away
    The girls
    She crys to have you near
    A tear runs down
    Her sweet little face
    Too young to understand
    Only so much can we do for her
    All she really needs you
    The drugs, the booze
    You disappear
    Behind a mask that isnt you
    So pull yourself together
    Not for me
    And not for you
    But for your little girl




    Submitted on 2007-11-19 18:41:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is such a powerful piece... i relate to it really well because i was pregnant with my ex bf's (who was an addict) baby. i like how
    dominate the words are and how it comes together in a powerful message. well done this is an excellent write and a fav!
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by withouthope | [ Reply to This ]



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