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    dots Submission Name: An Awesome Kissdots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.54 - 800/427/261
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 93
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    dotsAn Awesome Kissdots
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    Hot lips...


    Big nose...


    Difficult maneuver



    WOW !!!




    Submitted on 2007-11-19 21:04:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yes i could just picture it,quite funny indeed,
    some kisses require such skills, god nose it.
    gerry
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]
      X) Hilarious. Must've been an awesome kiss indeed....Thanks for the laugh

    -C.L.
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Coeur Lazulis | [ Reply to This ]


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