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    dots Submission Name: A True Cousindots
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    Author: sarahthegreat
    ASL Info:    16/f/In a very dark place
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 48/69/101
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsA True Cousindots
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    A cousin is a cousin
    But a true cousin is much more
    A true cousin is someone who cares about you
    Someone who trusts you
    Someone who can talk to you and understand you
    Someone who can confide in you
    Someone you can confide in
    Someone who is always there for you
    In good times and in bad times
    A true cousin can comfort and help you
    Through your troubles
    Everyone has cousins
    And everyone has true cousins
    You are a true cousin to me




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