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    Author: Myopic
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 31/58/63
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    i confess
    i have never
    been at such
    rest.
    oh,
    i digress -

    what a mess.




    Submitted on 2007-11-20 21:04:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's an easy read and enjoyable too. There's a lot of meaning in those few words but what it is I can't really tell, so yes, longer next time.
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by fate_s nemisis | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it...i don't know why. I guess its simple and the point gets out there. A lot is said in just a few words here and for most writers, including myself, that is a hard feit to acomplish. good piece...but next time let the reader endulge in a longer piece please.
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by ares_nuke_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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