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    dots Submission Name: Naturally Secretivedots
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    Author: ruinedsnapshots
    ASL Info:    31-f-earth
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 25/27/19
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Just a little something to whittle away my oh so valuable time.


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    dotsNaturally Secretivedots
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    Secret stone whispers of the mountain,
    heard by sweet rain passing through,
    are told to shade trees of pine valleys.

    Worm ripe soil wriggles in arousal,
    beckoning berried bushes to lean closer.

    Trickling streams eavesdrop, taking it all in,
    fill until satiated, and spread the word again.




    Submitted on 2007-11-20 21:15:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Absolutely Beautiful
    In this Write you showed the True Beauty of Nature and how she so Strongly affects our Earthly lives
    I really Loved how this came together
    I absolutely LOVE Nature poems and this one my Friend is Perfect
    Fantastic Work
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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