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    dots Submission Name: These Skylinesdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 120
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    These skylines, these city lights
    They burn with the sun.
    These tear drops, they cry out
    but they can’t silence these thoughts.
    This hollow, this screaming
    erupts the subconscious.
    The white lies, they’re alright
    and we’re so blind.
    Tripping and falling, upwards we’re crawling
    towards our destination.
    I see it for my miles, these veiled smiles
    they can’t deny treachery.

    Take it away; no reason to stay
    try talking faster
    I couldn’t win, if I wanted to lose
    this is our world.

    Fall at the altar, pray for transcendence
    just trying to buy some time.
    Pen out your heart with these foolish words
    they’re not listening, they don’t care…
    They don’t want to see when they stare
    holding themselves, and crying to sleep.

    Lucid and insane, here we remain
    tipping the odds in our favor
    all balance is lost.
    Do you understand what it’s like?
    When love forsakes the world

    Take it away; no reason to stay
    try talking faster
    I couldn’t win, if I wanted to lose
    this is our world.

    Stare at skylines, stare and pray
    fall to your knees, and lie to yourselves.
    Curl and weep, tremble incessantly
    hold to your heart what you hold dear.

    Selfish, arrogant skylines
    selfish, arrogant skylines….

    “These Skylines” by Jason C. Clement
    © Jason C. Clement





    Submitted on 2007-11-20 21:44:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Jason
    It is so Good to see you back Posting again
    I Honestly and Truly missed reading your Fantastic lyrics
    In this one I feel you are talking about a Couple that seems to be Lost in Love and they are having trouble seeing anything else but the Love they share
    This Flows beautifully and I would Love to hear this write matched to music
    Ive said all along you have an incredible talent of writing strong quality good lyrics
    Have you recorded anything new
    I would Love to hear it
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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