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Author: SlanderousLust
ASL Info:    21/Q/Four inches from you
Elite Ratio:    5.15 - 89 /137 /74
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Class/Type: Riddle /Romance
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Submitted on 2007-11-21 01:15:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Haha After scrolling down for about three minutes, I couldn't help but laugh.
There's something I really like about this. I've never seen so much repetition, but somehow, it works. Plus, I like the repeated lines.

But like hyproglo said, how come you left out the "Please, don't start" part in the middle of it?
Was it an accident or is that part of the point? At first, I figured it was like that for a reason, but... I don't know.

Wow I'm already starting to f*cking hate this chat thingy. Random f*cking idiots keep sending me messages saying things like, "I like eyeshadow. What color is your eye? I have an eye too."
Yeah, f*cking good for you.

Ohhhh... wait, if I click "log out," will that fix this?
Let's see.

Okay, sorry about the rude interruption (you can thank "Gabe" for that... if that's his real name).

Like I was saying...

Hah yeah, this is interesting. I don't get the riddle part though. I guess it flew right over my head.
I did get a lot of different things from it though, but I won't spend all morning trying to figure out which one you were aiming for and typing all of the possibilities.

So I'll just say "good stuff" and be on my way.

Good stuff.

-nikkki
| Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]
  How come you left out the "Please, dont start" part in the middle of it?

I like it simply for the fact that it gave a little spice to a somewhat boring repetative write, ya know?

Thanks for sharing.
| Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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