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Rustler


Author: nicelyJ
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Words: 47
Class/Type: Poetry /Satire
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an old poem that I can't find, my attempt to re-write.


Rustler



Angry with words for fleeing
Disagreeable beasts that I've
burdened myself with
in an attempt to pen something
of worth
but with all of my wrangling
what do I have to show
I have no choice
but to let the words go


NicelyJ




Submitted on 2007-11-21 06:42:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Disagreeable beasts that I've
burdened myself with
in an attempt to pen something
of worth

ToOoOoO long phrase... why don't you think you should try to make it bit shorter...

But in general I found in this piece something that reminds me of myself!!!
I really love it!!
Keep On GOod Working !!...
| Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]


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