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    dots Submission Name: A Momentdots
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    Author: WhY-dO-yOu-CrY
    ASL Info:    17/F/ConnUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 131/79/78
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
    Total Views: 155
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    Bytes: 43



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    dotsA Momentdots
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    A Moment in life is all you need to End it.




    Submitted on 2007-11-21 11:53:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow short but true very true! such little wording but such big meaning lknow what i mean? -sara-
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Kornfreakinabox | [ Reply to This ]
      That couldn't be more true. If you took out "the" it'd make more sense to me though. But other than that, I like it.

    Good stuff.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]


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