Birds Of Love
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I almost lost belief in LOVE... til I met those two wonderful persons...
And here's their story !!
And here's their story !!
Birds Of Love
I can see them as no one ever did Birds of love spreading their wings Skipping school just to gather Staying cool, as they suffer Screwing old love that didn't persist But the day they met… None of them could resist!! Each had a story of heartbreak to tell But once they met… " Might the past burn in hell " They had no faith… They had no dream But once they met They became the faith They became the dream The love, the passion to esteem Her touch… The tender breeze that took his breath away His voice… The sweet harmony that makes her sway My friends … My Best Friends… The best of luck is all I wish you !! |
Submitted on 2007-11-21 14:58:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| That is totally charming and very strong. A more artificial poet would have maybe worked on a strong sophisticated ending (last two lines or three), but that would not have improved the poem ... just the verse! | Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ] | Great poem ! I loved the lines ... | "They had no dream But once they met They became the faith" Thanks for sharing. Kelley Frost | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | |
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