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Birds Of Love

Author: Dying Young
ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 78 /34 /27
Words: 131
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I almost lost belief in LOVE... til I met those two wonderful persons...
And here's their story !!

Birds Of Love

I can see them as no one ever did
Birds of love spreading their wings

Skipping school just to gather
Staying cool, as they suffer
Screwing old love that didn't persist
But the day they met…
None of them could resist!!
Each had a story of heartbreak to tell
But once they met…
" Might the past burn in hell "
They had no faith…
They had no dream
But once they met
They became the faith
They became the dream
The love, the passion to esteem

Her touch…
The tender breeze that took his breath away
His voice…
The sweet harmony that makes her sway

My friends … My Best Friends…
The best of luck is all I wish you !!

Submitted on 2007-11-21 14:58:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That is totally charming and very strong.

A more artificial poet would have maybe worked on a strong sophisticated ending (last two lines or three), but that would not have improved the poem ... just the verse!
| Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  Great poem ! I loved the lines ...

"They had no dream
But once they met
They became the faith"

Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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