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    dots Submission Name: Passionlessdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 140
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1365



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       Passionless, a new song


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    dotsPassionlessdots
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    Narcissistic benevolence, a tyranny in motion;
    Lost and forsaken souls, in the holds of a bomber plane.
    Look in these eyes and see what they see,
    Take a moment of your time, accept our failures.
    I wish sometimes the world was a pantomime
    we’d all stop our nonsense, the lies, and act in accordance.
    But I fear I place too much faith in the world
    so I’ll wait on this cold steel floor for ascension.

    I hold us all at fault, don’t pass the blame;
    Belligerent and bewildered, we’re all just the same
    Sadistic, egotistical lies feigning the truth
    In exchange for a moment of heaven.

    Please, Father, forget what we’ve done,
    our passionless hearts, our reasonless ways;
    Our eyes are laced with apathy, dead from the start.
    We all praise the white coats, their drugs and their theories
    they’ll make us a miracle kiss, and wish this all away.
    Watch when the fire starts to fall
    and we all turn to gray.

    I hold us all at fault, don’t pass the blame;
    Belligerent and bewildered, we’re all just the same
    Sadistic, egotistical lies feigning the truth
    In exchange for a moment of heaven.

    “Passionless” by Jason C. Clement
    November 21st 2007
    © Jason C. Clement




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    ||| Comments |||
      This one has alooot of big words in it.
    It's hard for me to understand..
    Maybe it's just me.
    But how am i suppose to know.

    Great job tho.
    You put alot of thought into it i can tell. :]

    Great work. Keep it up!

    -YvonneJoyce
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by YvonneJoyce | [ Reply to This ]



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