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    dots Submission Name: who are youdots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotswho are youdots
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    who are you
    in the window
    looking at the sky
    with purple glares
    and deep thought pupils

    who is that,
    you are looking at
    in the cloudless rain
    is it you or is it me
    in joy or in pain.




    Submitted on 2007-11-21 16:21:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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