Description: It isnt anything I was trying to make perfect....just feelings on paper...I will take the critism because I like to hear it but I just want to know that this was just written because it was on my mind.
The times are littered with memories
Good and bad
Inside is like a cold winter
With no sweater in sight
You fall into the snow
Frostbite takes you
Its not you that you fight for
But you cant do it alone
I stand next you
Bracing for the next boulder to crush you
So you wont get crushed alone
Your eyes whell up with tears
I hold you close
Giving you warmth
I whisper softly in your ear
"You can cry if you need to"
But I know you wont
You cant let her see you cry
You have to be strong for her
And in the same way
That you must be strong for her
I am for you
You wont ever see me cry
Just as she wont see you cry
Very Very well written
You expressed yourself very well
In this write and the other one of yours I commented on one can easily see you are truly a Good Friend who truly does care
Please dont ever change
The World needs People like you despertely
I Loved the line of life being so cold without a sweater in sight
That my Friend was very cleverly said
Excellent Job
God Bless
Ron
Lovely, i don't understand how no one has yet commented here.
"I whisper softly in your ear
'You can cry if you need to' "
I think i wrote something like that in a story once, mmh.. 'll never know.
Submission Name: Dry Tears
