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    dots Submission Name: Can you?dots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 492/502/133
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    This night and a tomorrow,
    Sleeping and waking,
    Between noises and pauses,
    Can you hear?
    the sound of hesitance;

    A few suns earlier and many moons after,
    Walking and stopping,
    Between panting and pointing,
    Can you hear?
    the sound of a smile;

    Today and one twilight later,
    Waiting and anticipating,
    Amidst busy moments and slowness
    Can you hear?
    the sound of a heartbeat;

    Here and then,
    Thinking and saying,
    Between dreaming and coaxing,
    Can you hear?
    the sound of a love;

    Now and forever,
    Questioning and answering,
    Amidst all the futures and presents,
    Can you hear?
    the sound of asking;

    Today and everyday;
    Working and resting
    Between more and less
    Can you hear?
    the sound of enough;

    Yesterdays and tomorrows
    Repenting and hoping
    Can you hear?
    the sound of prayer,
    ..about to be answered?




    Submitted on 2007-11-22 15:43:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Silence makes no noise, and yet its sound is deafening! This lovely poem adresses those hugely powerful forces that make no noise, but are deafening in their presence and power! This piece is awsome in the depth of content and beautiful in subject and presentation!

    Such a beautiful poem needs a stronger title; a suggestion: "Sounds That Only A Heart Hears"?
    | Posted on 2008-01-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      hey and hi once again thanx for yor previous comments
    i liked the whole concept of yor post, i think the title opens up alot of thought

    great write and hope all is well with you

    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-11-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. The point is that this modern world make us deaf towards the smaller and most of the time more important thbings in life. Good writing!
    | Posted on 2007-11-23 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Once more your work has inspired me, This is lovely and I truly mean that. You are awesome for lack of a better word.
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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