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    dots Submission Name: cipriones en su tintadots
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    Author: stasisindarknes
    ASL Info:    15/f/vt
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 23/28/27
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 56
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       for anyone who doesnt know cipriones en su tinta is a dish they make in spain. it's squid cooked in its own ink.


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    dotscipriones en su tintadots
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    You said you’d never be my friend,
    Well I think you should keep that promise.
    Stranded on this island void of bliss
    Where I sit in my own filth.
    Cipriones en su tinta.

    I’ve cut all the ropes that could have reeled me in,
    Sunk all the rafts.
    Due to my lack of trust,
    My excess despise.
    Floaters are enemies
    Sinkers are friends,
    Or were.




    Submitted on 2007-11-22 19:14:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like the imagery and the original word choices. The open hostility and lack of trust. But I have to say, in my delirious lack of sleep, I scanned through it the first time and burst out laughing when I saw the word floaters. Sorry. But seriously, I like the way you ended the write. The casual regret. Beautiful touch.
    | Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]



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