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    dots Submission Name: Promise of a Lifetimedots
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    Author: garnet4david
    ASL Info:    20/M/Indonesia
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 81/83/58
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 568



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       Any comments, thought, or advise will be appreciated. I also want to know whether this one is romantic or not. Thank You.


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    dotsPromise of a Lifetimedots
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    A promise had been made,
    to stop meeting each other.
    By taking my heart back,
    Did i feel relieve?

    Day by day passed,
    i slept within a deep silence.
    Ubiquitous cloud traced me.
    Have you ever feel the same?

    By drying all the tears inside,
    I can feel ache no more.
    The distance that keep us apart.
    I never feel any regret.

    Now i have a reason to smile.
    A goddless to be protected.
    I vowed to keep our promise.
    Not to see each other forever...




    Submitted on 2007-11-23 02:14:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was written very well. I liked it alot, mostly because I can relate. I've had relationships that ended like this. it always sucks. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading.

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    | Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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