Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Engagementdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Speacenik
    ASL Info:    23/f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    7.09 - 413/359/96
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsEngagementdots
    -------------------------------------------


    In a Dublin moment more precious
    than stones inlaid in engagement rings,

    a daughter’s French polished nails
    tap H. M. Samuels window, staccato,

    she shows a still young mother,
    married twenty-five years that diamond band

    she desires. A fortnight ago, a drunken
    Northern friend dusted a glittering halo.

    on her blouse. Recalled how it was bequeathed
    by a Belfast fiancé half a decade dead.




    Submitted on 2007-11-23 16:50:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
       i liked this,if i understand it right,the one girl has a life of love to look forward too, in the south. while her friend in the north has already lost her love.

    In a Dublin moment more precious
    than stones inlaid in engagement rings,

    i really like these opening lines, i was just wondering why dublin? if you would have said belfast, i would have understood it more because of the troubles there,(like in a moment of peace-fire or so)or has it a different meaning?
    thanks for the read
    tschüß
    ger
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.