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    dots Submission Name: Beingdots
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    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    7.33 - 65/34/38
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 896



    Description:
       Sorry if theres any mistakes didnt feel like doing spell check. -.-


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    dotsBeingdots
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    I want to be the best I can
    I want to be great
    I want to see my name in lights
    Or even just on a slate

    I want to be an idol an inspiration to all
    I want to be a caregiver
    The one who treats the smalll

    I want to be an equal to everyone I hate
    I want to be forgiven
    To start off with a clean slate
    I want to be rembered
    For the good and the bad
    I want to have a home
    That only Ive ever had

    I want to look down the road
    And not hear judgment being thrown
    I want to let my hair down
    And be someone Ive never known

    I want to be free
    To runaway to something new
    Something unrecongizable to me

    I want to leave thhis world behind
    And start off new
    Because then,only then
    Will I truly be free




    Submitted on 2007-11-23 18:04:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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