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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Description:
       ~a series of isolated sci-fi persona posts lifted/borrowed from another site. bon apetit~


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    Aliens (Larval Meanderings in Distant Galaxies)


    Dearest Xethorb-
    How art thou and thy gently swaying eyes?
    My eleven appendages ache for thee, precious shazbat
    To hold thee under the third moon of Jupiter
    What Bliss! I couldn't be happier!
    Unless I'd swallowed a poet...


    And so we swoon
    bereft of poisons we relish
    ah, cursed, frail terrans
    why must ye be tethered
    to pernicious oxygen
    when methane is so bouyant?


    And why evolve
    when plankton bathe
    us in a million microscopic kisses?
    diatoms of eyeless, mindless glee
    o, tail lashed trilobite, remember me!
    when our remains are used
    to polish shoes


    I'm dreaming of a bantoo zethorb
    just like the one in my data flow
    where the tendrils glisten and tigreth listen
    to the shrieks of amoebella
    hissing in frozen methane snow...


    Here comes Gribble Gob
    Here comes Gribble Gob
    Mars is such a pain
    Granny was that
    puddle I played in
    Full of acid rain?


    Grampa was atomized
    With a phaser
    When Grandma caught him
    Cheating Lunar Eve
    Beowulf's hot mama
    Was the culprit
    Now the Jolie couple
    Are lint on Grannie's sleeve.




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      Bill,

    OK, that was the funniest Christmas poem I've read all week. The world could use more Christmas sci-fi humor. Actually I didn't realize it was a bunch of rewrites of Christmass tunes until I got to the "Grandpa got atomized..." part. Made me have to reread it a dozen times. So you're channelling Weird Al Yankovic on hallucinogens now?

    Annie
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL. Terrans remind me of Starcraft.

    Just think... "I Kerrigan, take your limb in Spatial Matrimony... may the stars beat on our pods tonight... blah blah blah..."

    You're a piece of work, not-so-old old man.

    This reminds me of a piece written by Lelik probably two years ago. I think he called it "Respectable Distances." The whole thing was unintelligable but that in itself already said what he wanted.

    It also reminds me of Innaritu's Babel... how it spoke of our differences and how it bridged those differences by giving the reality that humans are humans regardless of race.

    I really am glad that you still walk among the living. What would we do without you?
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is so random but so well written, i love the whole space thing anyway and this is weird and wonderful......more please!!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by freeangel | [ Reply to This ]


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