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    dots Submission Name: 16 On the Road to Honoluludots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 329/335/139
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 151
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    Bytes: 1144



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       Full Title: "16 On the Road to Honolulu, Watching the War; It's Been A Good Year"

    Missing someone, even at 4 in the morning


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    dots16 On the Road to Honoluludots
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    I'm just past my 8th cloud
    14 miles high,
    and hell, not a moment to late.
    It's late, I'm thinking of you,
    of the way you smile,
    of the way you look at my face.

    I want to call you
    I want to see you.
    I'm always with you.
    here in this place.

    I want to call you
    I want to hear you.
    I'm always with you
    even miles away.

    Forgive my lips, please.
    because they find joy,
    in the most, unusual place.
    And now I'm quiet,
    well, not so quiet,
    humming something for you to take.

    I want to call you
    I want to hear you.
    I'm always with you,
    even this late.

    I want to call you
    I want to see you.
    I'm always with you,
    here and away.

    And, oh God, I love you.
    I want to kiss you.
    please, always be with me,
    through my mistakes.

    Oh god, I love you,
    I want to be with you.
    Forever, and ever
    and ever, and ever.
    Always.




    Submitted on 2007-11-24 04:02:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, what passion. I love it when I read a poem that causes me to feel emotion.
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by ashik | [ Reply to This ]


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