feels good to comment again on your stuff.
i won't lie, you said it yourself, this isn't all too good. but with a little more lines and your natural talent of keeping things simple it could be WAY better.
not disin on you, just tellin what i think.
i like this. "the 'ing'" is sort of an ironic title, as "ing" signifies action and the conclusion of this poem:
always fearing,
the true meaning
suggests no movement at all, because there is nowhere to move in the first place, as if we are fearing the true meaning, even though the "skin yearns and the blood burns." good job! very effective.
Submission Name: The "ing"
