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    dots Submission Name: Why i say i love youdots
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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 711
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       to my love and fiance andrew


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    dotsWhy i say i love youdots
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    I love the way you look at me,
    Your eyes so bright and blue.
    I love the way you kiss me,
    Your lips so soft and smooth.

    I love the way you make me so happy,
    And the ways you show you care.
    I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
    And the way you're always there.

    I love the way you touch me,
    Always sending chills down my spine.
    I love that you are with me,
    And glad that you are mine.




    Submitted on 2007-11-24 11:31:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cool poem I think its great..and I know how you feel! Comment on mine?
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