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Why i say i love you


Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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to my love and fiance andrew


Why i say i love you




I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.

I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.

I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.




Submitted on 2007-11-24 11:31:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Cool poem I think its great..and I know how you feel! Comment on mine?
| Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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