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    dots Submission Name: Memorysdots

    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Today will be a memory
    yesterday is a memory drifting away
    memories turn into tears,
    tearing life apart.

    Fear of moving on, afraid of change,
    in a minute this will just be a memory
    memories are all pain in vain
    memories are like dreams, a reflection of the past.

    Memories are vision of what it used to be.
    my memories are but of sadness and struggle
    what are yours?
    are they to of sadness and struggle?

    It is but a memory
    that dwindles as each day passes me by.
    and as it slowly fades
    I huddle in my room and cry.

    A memory thatís all I have
    thatís all thatís left
    nothing but a mere memory
    that still lingers, only for a little while longer in my head.

    Donít forget about the past
    without memories there is no yesterday.
    make every day a memory
    one with no regrets

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