Hmm..You have a very great vocabulary I must say. -Which is awesome ;P
I dont quite understand this poem..But I do sort of. I get at the end,that we kneel before our sin.I think right before that you are saying we are just doing the same routines over and over?
Lol, sorry >.<
Its been a long day, but I dont thing id understand it much better earlier in the day either..
I think this has potential,and you are a great writer..Maybe you could try to make the topic stand out more or put what its about in the descriptions?