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    dots Submission Name: An Artists Canvasdots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 895/379/103
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 139
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 914



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    dotsAn Artists Canvasdots
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    Bodies quiver from ice touched lips.
    Lines so fluid you melt into me.
    Sugar sliced fruit.

    I draw you in and taste your scent .
    You’re the woman that paints my sunrises.
    Shortness of breath.

    Drop everything and make love to me tonight.
    Starry nights, bright tail lights.
    My heart cries more!

    True love molds our life.
    Dance the Tango with me.
    A photo of Paris.

    You’re the apple that’s fallen from the sky.
    You’re the apple of my eyes.
    Luscious RED lips.

    All I want to do is see you smile.
    Champaign drips down between your breasts.
    Candle wax hardens on your finger tips.

    You have brought color back into my life.
    I will bring life back into yours.
    This life of art I give to you.
    © 2007 Kelley Frost




    Submitted on 2007-11-24 17:03:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very spiffy, sweet. how bout changing breast to breast(s) though (line 17)?
    Erotic, seductive. Pulls a chord in the pit of your stomach, makes you want to kiss melted chocolate from your lovers lips, and lick whip cream off your fingers--very very slowly.
    Delicious.

    peace
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Madelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Awsome poem...I loved the way you described everthing! 2 kudos to u!
    | Posted on 2007-11-25 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]



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