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    dots Submission Name: A Lullaby from heavendots
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    Author: whendt
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       Sometimes its hard to be a single mother with kids and sometimes people think they can prey on the week, But I'm here to tell you it will not work and you will pay if you try and harm one so gentle. A mother is the most prized thing on this earth and they are watched over from high.


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    dotsA Lullaby from heavendots
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    Do not fear what you can not see.
    I am there to protect you from all harm.
    My wings will wrap around you tight so
    No harm will come to you at night.

    No tears need shed, no fears will fall.
    You and our family are safe from it all.
    Smile now child of the son.
    Take to the light.

    Never fear what’s in the night.
    Our love shines through the panes.
    Out into the world so dark,
    And it fills all evil with fear.

    I am your cantor in this song of victory.
    No longer will you seem blind.
    You now have power over the dark.
    I have set your free from all that prey .

    Love is the strongest bond.
    Love protects from all wrong.
    Love lifts us up.
    And in the end love will get us through it all.




    Submitted on 2007-11-24 17:06:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This really is quite a good idea and I must say that it is well expressed too,....


    This write-up is a lot more meanigful a 'lullaby' than the usual 'singsongs' taht come to our mind at the mention of the word - 'lullaby'...something we all should realize ....at all times but especially so at the end of the day while we are retiring to rest......

    I think you got what the Good Lord wants to say to each and every person in the world.

    .....well written ....good work
    | Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      What an excellent idea for a poem, and what an excellent ode to a single mother! I have a soft place in my heart for the chores of motherhood, which must be extra difficult to the single mother!

    Bravo!
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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