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    dots Submission Name: Sleeping Beautydots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 895/379/103
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSleeping Beautydots
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    I see you sleeping on pillows made of down.
    Your skin shines from the moonlight from above.
    I wonder if your dreaming of me so sound.

    Your hair falls softly to the side of your face.
    Lips breathe in softly and then let go to release .
    You seem so content with no worry in sight.

    I wonder wear your dreams are taking you tonight.
    I snuggle up close and kiss you goodnight.
    For you got a head start to our meeting place.

    Lying so close to you always makes me smile.
    The contour of our body fits so well.
    I lean in to your ear and tell…………..

    I'll meet you by our favorite waterfall.
    A smile appears on your face.
    As I drift off to sleep.
    © 2007 Kelley Frost




    Submitted on 2007-11-24 17:18:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was both delicious and delightful! My favorite part is:

    I'll meet you by our favorite waterfall.
    A smile appears on your face.
    As I drift off to sleep.
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You really know how to deliver a message. I feel the passion put into this. I really can't say anything to critique it because it really is just perfect. I love it :)
    | Posted on 2007-11-25 00:00:00 | by numbertwenty | [ Reply to This ]



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