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    dots Submission Name: A Reflection On A Window Panedots
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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 700
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    dotsA Reflection On A Window Panedots
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    I spy a reflection on clear glass,
    Who...with contemplating time to pass
    Could the reflection be?

    Perhaps you
    Perhaps me

    Yet, if the reflection lies in clear glass
    How...can an image come to pass
    On a silicon sea?

    Perhaps mirrors lie
    Perhaps a clearer truth

    Who can know?





    Submitted on 2007-11-25 12:13:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A truth that leads to more questions. To be honest, we can't know, and that's where such great poetry comes from. A nice thought, and very well done. Too much elaboration would have killed the "mystery" to the thought.
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]
      There are somethings that we will never know...
    I really liked the imagry this provided 'silicon sea' esspecially. I think this idea could be expanded upon, if you have time look at this again and see if you can come up with anything else...perhaps, you are never obligated to anything I say!
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      There are somethings that we will never know...
    I really liked the imagry this provided 'silicon sea' esspecially. I think this idea could be expanded upon, if you have time look at this again and see if you can come up with anything else...perhaps, you are never obligated to anything I say!
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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