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    dots Submission Name: Seeingdots
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    Author: Drow_dancer04
    ASL Info:    18/female/Mukilteo,WA
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 1/2/8
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 762
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 643



    Description:
       This is something that I wrote just today and I wanted to share it with my love... That's all. What do you think? TK


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    dotsSeeingdots
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    I look into your eyes,
    And I don't see what you see.
    I look into your eyes
    And I know that you see me.

    I look upon your face,
    And I love what I see.
    I look upon your face
    And I see that you love me.

    I look inside your heart,
    And I see your love abounds.
    I look inside your heart,
    And your faith is all around.

    I look inside your soul,
    And I have no fear.
    I look inside your soul,
    And I know that I am HOME.

    To: Zai
    From: D_D04

    Seeing really is believing.
    Love you!




    Submitted on 2007-11-25 15:35:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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