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Written at a critical time in my life.. all about the choices I was making and how I felt stuck in wanting the negative so badly. I still do, and this was written in 2005 or 2006
I can't find peace of mind now
I can't think of how it got like this
I can't remember where I put my fist
And that was over a year ago!!
I can barely think straight now
I can rarely remember their faces now
And their voices are lost among the shattering glasses
And the spoons are resting now, pissed at the way time passes
Where did it run off to?
It got lost in this depression
And the spoons took it down more
Now I'm just sitting, just waiting with my confessions
I need to rinse myself of these sins
They keep attacking me
And they feel exactly like pins
And the thoughts just won't come anymore
The need to get it all out is gone
Now I'd rather let everything set in
See if I can last this way for very long
(So now I'm sitting in the spoon
I'm the little piece of cotton
Soaking everything I can up
And then something comes in
To take it from me
And give it to someone more deserving)
Submitted on 2007-11-25 18:33:29
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