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    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 22/21/26
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I think about you night and day
    Every morning I wake up, I pray
    I hope that you can soon feel sane
    and stop throwing away such an amazing brain

    I see such a man in you
    A man that wants to come back through
    A touch of the needle takes that all back
    Throws you right back into the trash

    What a waste of a great mind
    Wasting away what could be great times
    Missing out on feelings that are there
    If you could only see how much we care

    At night when we lay down to rest
    and I hide my face in your chest
    I wonder if you will wake up in the morning
    I wonder if you will come back to life at all





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