I loved the imagery in this piece. There was so much of it, and every image brought to mind was beautiful and...captivating. I hung on to every word in this poem and even though I agree that it did seem like pieces it was a very well written poem. Happy faces!
I really loved this poems imagery. And the diction you used just rolled off my tongue, I actually had to mouth with it.
"sky of brilliant jade.
Moondust fell from heavens"
Is one of my favorite images in the entire poem, and matched with the picture above it, it really helps get the setting of the poem into your head. I want to be able to take more excerpts i like from the poem, but I fear that if i attempt that I'll just end up coping and pasting the entire poem. So, ill just let you know that I valued every word, and the images those words brought to mind. This deserves a +Fav.
I doubt I could complete a piece without using the word "the."
I'm not sure if I'm grasping the whole concept, though.
The poem seems more like seperate bits and pieces rather than a complete thought or idea.
However, it is likely it is just beyond me.
(Please know I don't mean any of that negatively.)