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    dots Submission Name: My Auto-Biodots
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    Author: Dead_inside
    ASL Info:    17/femali/somewhere in KS
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 14/43/30
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 180
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    Bytes: 822



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       aH... i had to go to my probation


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    Lost in reality sittin within myself, I'm going blind within this hell. Nothing is clear, no one can hear me. I'm Screaming, Decieving this sound MAKE ME SEE. Rotting flesh, organs decay, rotting away more each day. Eyeless manican outside this soul, what is my goal? WHAT IS MY GOAL? To be blind throughout my whole life? To give my days by the edge of a knife? I want to be strong, strong like you. I want to be WRONG, wrong like you. My tongue is melting, the bullets are pelting me my back my neck my arms are dead. My soul, my heart, my brain is dead. Beating me inside my head. over, and over, and OVER AGAIN! She beats me down, they beat me down. Feel me screaming but hear no sound... Lock me up throw away the key restrain my limbs so i cant get free. Bones dissolve, no way to resolve MY PROBLEMS......




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      Wow this is so cool. not that this is how you feel of course but the way it was structured is genius!
    | Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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