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    dots Submission Name: My Most Beautiful Sindots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    18/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 274/316/90
    Words: 437
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 176
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    Description:
       This poem is very long. I know it dosnt make a lick of sense and has al ot of errors so yeh. Enjoy!


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    dotsMy Most Beautiful Sindots
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    My heart lies broken
    In 2 pieces on the floor.
    Rip it to shreads,
    Its already numb and dead.

    Still bleeding where you left it.
    Sew it back together,
    Try to fit it back in.
    You my love were my most beautiful sin.
    Watch me bleed,
    and ill stain your mind,
    You were a monster of some kind.

    I watch your expressions change,
    Happy, sad, depressed.
    Now find all of my clothes,
    Try to get me dressed.

    Hide what you have done,
    Put my heart away,
    Think before you talk,
    Remember the words you will say.
    Tery to keep your story straight,
    Now you start over with a clean slate.

    But, your past will come to light.
    The first "I love You" ,
    Remember that night?
    I my dear will haunt you untill you die.

    Everytime you sleep,
    You will dream about me.
    Every single "I Love You" LIE,
    Makes you feel guilty.

    Create your own nightmare,
    ending in the same scene.
    You listen intently,
    To my broken heart beat.

    My heart lie broken
    2 pieces on the floor,
    In your mind i reopen this door.
    Your days will seem so long,
    and your nights so short.
    Breaking hearts was your only sport.

    Dress me up,
    Now put me down.
    Still blood, my heart found.
    Replace it sideways,
    Your past replays.

    Stitches across, Stitches down.
    How much more, Untill you drown?
    Your murder of a heart will catch up to you.
    You will feel so guilty it will kill you.

    But, you just live on
    With everything you have done,
    Cutting, and drinking,
    In the end i have won.
    Rip my heart out again and again.
    Leave it in two pieces,
    Grimmace, Grin.

    Do your voodoo or what you may.
    Over and over i will say,
    Love oh love, I am your sin.
    Will you remember where this begins?

    Replace my heart upright,
    Now sew me up.
    Through this all your tears fill a cup.
    Over flowing sad, and sorry.

    Come my love, Reign over me.
    Now do you see,
    Your thoughts whirle in the blackest seas.

    Confused, Lost seemingly depressed.
    You start to love life less and less.
    Put the gun to your head,
    Now let me watch.
    And attempt that which no one else could fathom.

    Help me heal, i see your remorse.
    I hope you die, in the darkest sense of course.
    My heart lie broken,
    2 pieces on the floor,
    Not far from it i watched you fail,
    Through that open door.




    Submitted on 2007-11-27 11:49:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is such a good write...It wow...im speachless...
    | Posted on 2008-01-27 00:00:00 | by Bloodlust86 | [ Reply to This ]
      It makes some sense if what you are going for is that someone hurt you and left you to fix it yourself. But you keep thinking of hoping that they'll come back. Hoping they'll feel guilty enough to help fix it themselves. That the pain they had for hurting you would make you feel better. It sounds like you hope for him to come back but the same time you want him to die and stay away.... I have felt this it's kind of hard to explain it but you seemed to have dom=ne very well (assuming of course that's what you were going for.) Any way good job.
    | Posted on 2007-11-27 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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