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    dots Submission Name: ha ha, the joke's on medots

    Author: blu_kittin
    ASL Info:    20/F/Garden of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 711/397/207
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 843
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 438

       this is just my little spitefullness.
    you know, sometimes, when people suck, you just have to cry about it, laugh about it, and keep on being friends with them, cause you just care too much to let them go
    not to much to play a joke on em tho
    to riff raff, may you read this one day and laugh

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    dotsha ha, the joke's on medots

    ha ha, the joke's on me
    ha ha, clever as can be
    ha ha, the joke's on me

    oh man, you really got me
    oh man, i can't stop laughing
    oh man, you really got me

    oops, i told the truth
    oops, couldn't close my mouth
    oops, now she knows the truth

    ha ha, the joke's on you
    ha ha, i got her, too
    ha ha, the joke' on you

    Submitted on 2007-11-27 13:11:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can imagine this to be a song, yes. It has an air of the...temporary psychological aspect that much of prized literature has. I don't know if you know what I'm talking about. It is ambigious, yet it seems to have personality. Definately. And it definately is personal.
    | Posted on 2010-11-03 00:00:00 | by coloredstone | [ Reply to This ]
      Like nicelyJ, I reckon this could be a song, maybe that's what you wrote it for ? I can hear the beat and chanting it, some lines want to be repeated.
    | Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Your strange girl(smile) I mean that in a good way.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-12-30 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. I had to read it, because the title made me think of a poem call 'Why am I not laughing' I wrote way way back in high school.

    This poem could probably be a song.
    As I was reading I could kinda hear it,
    uptempo with a happy tone.
    You don't sing do you?

    I think I'll re-post my poem since you made me think of it.

    thanks for sharing this :)

    | Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]

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