God's Glorious Envoy by Parul garg

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Submission Name: God's Glorious Envoy dots

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Author:	Parul garg
ASL Info:	26/f/earth
Elite Ratio:	6.14 - 240/100/30
Words:	108

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	253
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	744

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This morning...

God's Glorious Envoy dots

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God's glorious envoy, majestic in his loneliness
Shines indifferently on spires and the domes
Looking for the beauty for whom he is ablaze
Haven't you felt the pain in his intense gaze!

With his sanctifying touch, he warms the ephemera
Waking the miracles, hidden in each pore of earth
Embracing the smallest being, conveying God's love
Himself floating solemnly on solitude's curve...

He watches little orphans too, inheritors of the cold pyres
Innocence stifled, besmirched, half dead, half asleep
Songs lie silenced on lips, tears dried forever in eyes
The envoy slowly walks on, alas! burdened with too much light.

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  I revisted this piece and I am always very proud of your words and I, too, hear the echoes of your sentiments in divine love.

Tis not always easy....times change but human value does not....as you embrace and share your understanding of this you are sharing and guiding others to a place - we see "IT" but others have still the veil of illusion.

I am really proud to read your writings and share them and find inspiration in ALL~
love,peace,joy,abundance&smiles to share

tif

| Posted on 2008-01-15 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  "Burdened with too much light"

Very thought provoking words you know. I will let them sink into me and feel into them for a while

Thank you for sharing this piece.

Kate
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| Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
  What a wonderfully spiritual piece to read on this cold morning when "Waking the miracles, hidden in each pore of earth Embracing the smallest being, conveying God's love" seems most appropriate. All my best to you, Sharon
| Posted on 2007-12-25 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm happy to see you posted a wonderful new piece & "IT" goes right along with how I've been feeling the past couple of weeks - God is All and we are his expressions of light and being in all - how we choose to look at "IT" and respond to "IT" is the human choice and how we meld our lights together and appreciate the beauty in all is our choice too

Great and a fav!
love,peace,joy&smiles to share

tif
| Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Quite complex and different.......

you've put down the 'glory of God's nature' in quite a different manner.........watching over us.

pretty powerful and nice...overall.

good work.
| Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  What an absolutely breathtaking and marvelous feeling this truly wonderful verse inspires! The last verse is absolutely stunning and beautiful:

"The envoy slowly walks on, alas! burdened with too much light."

I don't have words that are good enough to compliment this marvelous, short poem, but it is truly awsome!

This is a Fav!
| Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  This is so beautiful, I could never leave comments such as the ones you do for me, but know I love your work entirely and tirelessly, I simply must favor this as it is a pure artistic expression of your truth, which is a rare combo I think among writers. Smiles for you

| Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
  Very well done. It flows somethly. the words you choose to depect your vision are acredited to you.
"
Embracing the smallest being, conveying God's love
Himself floating solemnly on solitude's curve..."
is my favorite

| Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by snufthepunk28 | [ Reply to This ]
  You have a way with words (smile) I like the way you used the lines

"He watches little orphans too, inheritors of the cold pyres
Innocence stifled, besmirched, half dead, half asleep
Songs lie silenced on lips, tears dried forever in eyes
The envoy slowly walks on, alas! burdened with too much light. "

This was heart felt and I could see your a caring person with a deepheart.
Thanks for sharing.Kelley Frost

| Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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