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    dots Submission Name: in the wakedots
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    Author: bas
    ASL Info:    24/f/somewhere...
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 42/48/35
    Words: 301
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 67
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    I lie in darkness as slumber won’t take me
    and thoughts,
    like a ballerina glide
    to slowly uncloak what is hidden

    In the vast blue ocean I am drunk on curiosity
    the yet- broken child hungrily feeds
    unchained and whole and receiving.

    The peculiarity of what a miracle is
    lingers just on the edge of a bleak perception.

    gratitude, like a soft caress shows her presence
    my heart fills with wonder


    .......and always live with trust
    with contentment in your heart
    with joy in your soul
    and die with pride
    and know that you are a miracle of perfect love






    Submitted on 2007-11-28 12:13:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I find that this gives me a still peace when I read it.
    I like the flow but it isn't the flow that makes me linger to read your write or even draws me in.
    The words are of one unity that allows the reader to feel the writers peace while taking in the thoughts that are evoking in this.

    We seem to walk through life with blinders on hoping to travel the right path, but it is not the path in which we walk that is important. It is the ability to know ourselves and be content with what we are given.

    Today as I sat to read a few poems I happened upon this one and I think that your little write has given me a sense of peace that I have been lacking for the last couple of months.

    Sometimes words are all we have to offer and even if we don't know it at the time they can effect someones heart and mind. Even if it is just one person that is touched it is still a miracle of a talent given to us if not but for a short time here.

    I thank you for these words today because I needed them today.

    I might have read too much into this write but this is how I read them and how they made me feel.

    Nicely done

    Respect and Admiration

    Clyde
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]



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