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Author: Inkybro
ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55 /69 /39
Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Odd; eccentric;
Weirdo; freak
"He's ballistic,
He's a creep"
Failure; loser;
Dumbass; weak
"He's sadistic
When he speaks"
Fucking scum
In mother's eyes
Goddamn dumb
And full of lies
Shitty son
In father's eyes
"Pathetic, huh,
The way he cries"

Submitted on 2007-11-28 13:49:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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