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    dots Submission Name: Perchance to Dreamdots

    Author: Chasm City
    ASL Info:    19-21/M/Sweden
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 1/3/4
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 972
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    I don't really know if this needs an explanation... Based on a true story :P

    I'd love a review on the actual song.

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    dotsPerchance to Dreamdots

    Hard to focus on the movie
    There's just so much more to see right next to me
    Standing just outside your doorway
    I'm bewildered by your smile, please stay a while

    Close the door, no one is looking
    You could easily disappear in here tonight
    To die, to sleep
    To sleep, perchance to dream of love
    Lying next to what we're dreaming of

    Keep the lights on
    I will give you all of me
    Come a bit closer
    I can't get enough of you

    Just this moment, just this second
    Another kiss and I can say I've lived my life
    Tonight I'm yours, tomorrow I'll be here
    Lying next to you, my dear

    Keep the lights on
    I will give you all of me
    Come a bit closer
    I can't get enough of you

    Keep the lights on
    I will give you all of me
    Come a bit closer
    I can't get enough of you

    Submitted on 2007-11-28 15:08:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is probably one of the most beautiful songs I have heard in a long long time. You have such an amazing voice- it's breath taking. The lyrics are stunning. You put a very classy and soft spin on what love should be and that is so hard to do these days. GREAT GREAT JOB! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I don't think I can say that enough!

    | Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by numbertwenty | [ Reply to This ]

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