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    dots Submission Name: Perseverance Is Our Key.dots
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    Author: numbertwenty
    ASL Info:    16 Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 55/25/9
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 694
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    Description:
       This poem- along with my poem Freedom Will Ring- is a poem I had to write for my English class on Perseverance. This one focuses on the opression blacks experienced after slavery was banished and the fight that they had to put up every day to become equal in the eyes of society. Again- like Freedom Will Ring- this isn't my best poem, but it fits the requirements and I'm proud of it. :) Enjoy.


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    dotsPerseverance Is Our Key.dots
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    You creep around corners to hide from the enemy,
    But it’s time to stand tall like the bravest soldier.

    To walk with no goal is to build with no foundation
    But now it’s time to gather this congregation.

    They need to hear our cry,
    Sing it as loud and persistent as a whippoorwill’s call.

    Perseverance is our key
    And eventually freedom will ring.

    We need to make it known at last that we meant it when we said,
    “All men are created equal!”

    Stand your ground and shout out loud.
    Anything it takes to make our country proud!




    Submitted on 2007-11-28 18:29:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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