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    dots Submission Name: Night Time Dreamsdots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 632
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 334



    Description:
       A Spur of the moment type of poem. I wrote it in one of My College Classses lol.


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    dotsNight Time Dreamsdots
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    Far away Lands

    Distant Dreams

    Children chase fireflies

    Sister Moon watches cautiously

    Mothers sing lullabys

    Fathers wish goodnight

    The Sandman swings in

    The toothfairy flutters by

    It seems to end in a blink




    Submitted on 2007-11-29 00:20:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this one. I loved the way you made us look in on your world! Great write!!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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