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    dots Submission Name: But Love is...dots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 617
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsBut Love is...dots
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    The soul moves on

    The body decomposes

    The human life span decreses

    The memories fade

    The mind might Forget

    The spirit can be crushed

    But love is everything




    Submitted on 2007-11-29 00:26:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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