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    dots Submission Name: But Love is...dots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsBut Love is...dots
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    The soul moves on

    The body decomposes

    The human life span decreses

    The memories fade

    The mind might Forget

    The spirit can be crushed

    But love is everything




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