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    dots Submission Name: Rest In Peacedots

    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 709
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 291


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    dotsRest In Peacedots

    Creation took 7 days

    The light goes out

    The food rots

    The water evaporates

    The animals detroy each other

    The mind and body falter

    But love is never ending

    So rest in peace, Lover

    Submitted on 2007-11-29 00:33:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What? wow that was uh ,ok, very depressing and I guess I dont get it but maybe its one of those things that are just to cool to understand
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]

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